My Email From Space by Karl

For homework we were asked to write an essay/email from space. Here is my finished draft

send too: Benbreswithablowback@gmail.com                                            
subject: Space Adventure
                                                                          Day 1 31/1/16
Hi Ben,
Karl here. I'm sending this email to you from Apollo 64, Yasa space craft module. We floated past
the moon and saw the U.S.A flag implanted on the moon. We went to The Red Planet also known as Mars,
one of the terestrial planets (The Rocky Planets). Adam and I played volleyball on Mars. We did a few back flips on the moon. That was our 1st day in space

                                                                          DAY 2 1/1/16
The next day we flew to Jupiter. Because its a gas planet you couldn't stand on it, but with our special designed space suits we could. The rocket could land but we were still tethered to the rocket just in case anything happened to us we wouldn't get lost. After that we flew back to the moon because Luke left his phone on the top of the Irish flag we implanted in the ground. Luke flew us back but the rocket fuel was nearly gone so we took Luke's phone and headed back to the space camp on Mars.
                                        
                                                                          DAY 3 2/2/16
On the next day we flew to Mercury. It was so hot  we heated up a hot a zip close bag and put a rock inside it. As quick as possible we got off Mercury and went to Venus. It wasn't as hot but it was still hot. We stayed there for about a half an hour longer than Mercury but we did the same thing with the zip close bag and the rock.

                                                                          DAY 4 3/2/16
After Venus we ventured far down into the solor system to Saturn. Since it's rings are made from dust and asteroids, the whole crew jumped from asteroid to asteroid to get around. After that we had a party at the camp celebrating that we had survived four successful days in space, which kind of scared me a bit because at any time in those four days, Jake,Adam Luke,Jack or myself could have died.
              
                                                                          DAY 5 4/2/16 
We woke up.We knew it was our last day in space. We gathered our stuff and hopped on the rocket. We flew to Neptune. We collected a rock and flew back to the moon. We took a photo and played some game. We decided to stay and go back to Earth the next day which is tomorrow.

 Yours Sincerely,

  Karl Radford